Beautiful

by cac123   Mar 3, 2005


Your always crying to yourself,
no ones listening at all,
no ones there to catch your tears,
behind the bathroom stall,

Your just one step away,
when the bridge comes falling down,
and you are laying there paralyzed,
no one is around,

No one seems to care,
that your life is worse then hell,
and you seem to be invisible,
but it might be just as well,

Cause you never seem,
to be as good as everyone and still,
you hope with all your heart,
maybe someday that you will,

All you flaws can be fixed and simply done,
but to paint the colors on the inside,
your the only one,

No one knows that you're alive,
their smiles are all fake,
no one cares how loud you scream,
or when your going to break,

You know your never happy,
you see yourself in hate,
don't do something you'll regret,
promise me you'll wait,

You know he doesn't love you,
he doesn't know you breathe,
don't tell yourself these things,
or soon you might believe,

If he never comes to you,
and his absence is here to stay,
just know that you are beautiful,
no one can ever take that away,

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~almost ur cinderella~*~

    Nice job dis poem is great ~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    I don't know quite what I was thinking when I commented earlier....that came across as very turse and it wasn't meant to be, I apologize. I enjoyed this piece very much, your thoughts and content are always very solid. Truly well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Wow it sounded like you were describing me...... I thought it was beautiful just like the title:) i really liked it and i thought it was one of your best, defiantly more then a 5*

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Very well done, I might make a few minor changes to some of the verses, but it's really not my place to say. The content was great, and the scheme was very well pulled off.

  • 19 years ago

    by Maddie

    very well written.. i hope you don't mind me making a slight criticism.. a HE wasn't mentioned at all until the end, it seemed like it was 2 seperate poems made into one.
    Other than that i really enjoyed it, good job