In place of love

by Kristal Sowiecki   Mar 3, 2005


In place of a heart
I have a stone

In place of friends
I am alone

In place of being happy
Is an empty soul

In place of real feeling
Is just a dark hole

In place of a smile
Is just a blank stare

In place of understanding
Nothing is fair

In place of honesty
I have no truth

In place of everything I had that was good
In place of all of that I just have you

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  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Hey, I love the idea behind this one, you wrote it so beautifully, thanx for your comment, keep it up xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ good lines, kristal, 1st poem i'm impressed from, in the past few days.
    opposing second line with every line, nice way to express omnipresent duality in life. write on, this one was a special poem to me. thank you very much. :) wish i could give it 10/5, sincerely.
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Josh Sowiecki

    Hey baby gurl! I love you, I like this poem but I don't really understand it. Do you feel bad about something? I hope I didn't do sumthin wrong. Hope I see you soon. Love your baby boy

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