The Other World

by ♥-Sharon Ardern-♥   Mar 5, 2005


* This was a song I wrote this morning, I've put it into poem format, and it’s inspired by Alice Cooper's ' Welcome To My Nightmare ' …

Welcome to my hole
Welcome to my cave
Where I broke I soul
And which will be my grave

A dark place, only come
If the world rejects you
When your life is done
My world excepts you

Cloudy air and dirty ground
Come in screaming I don't mind
I'm accustomed to the sound
Just leave your false smiles behind

This is my cave where
My blood has been spilled
I've been emptied without care
And not once refilled

It's cold but the constant flow
Of our own blood keeps us warm
The blades and lighters are I know
That each of us are well and truly torn.

You, too, are welcome here
We don't speak, we scream and cry
This is where I've spent the last year
This is where I was born:

And this is where I'll die.

© Copyright Sharon Ardern 2005

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  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    wow, that was sooo amazing! expressed so well, and the words were just dark and cold and just wow, very awesome. take care! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Its really good, i have no complaints, very impressive altho i dont know the song that inspired you, I'd like too! hehe! -5

    with love,
    Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by Hidden Meaning

    very deep . . . brilliant well done . . . hope your feeling a bit better luv ya jen x x x oh btw i wrote a poem 4 u and posted it today its not very good but i just posted it anyway x x x 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Excellent! love it :) Bet you'd be godo at singing it in the song format too :}. You're amazing hun. So creative <3 i love you hun xxxxxxx <3

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

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