Overwhelmed By Love

by ♥-Sharon Ardern-♥   Mar 6, 2005


I sit here, my fingers poised
Eager to write something real
But my head is so full
So confused by what I feel

So I’m writing this, hoping
It will turn to something great
Because I feel a need to write
And that it can not wait

Tonight I realized, that I am
In true love for the first time
I thought I felt it before
But this man is my life line

He seems perfect and yet
He is someone I can not touch
In the way I’d like too
And these feelings have become too much

When I speak with him
I want to pull him near
Want to kiss him, hold him
I want him always here

And I can see, in his eyes
That he feels the same
But damned rules keep us apart
And are causing me this pain

I have told him how I feel
He has confessed he feels it, too
Instead of making me feel better,
But I feel worse: cos I can not be with you.

© Copyright Sharon Ardern 2005

* People have asked what rules, i can't say what rules cos it may cause trouble ... wow it's complicated ... that's why it hurts so much ...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    wow, i agree with everyone hehe, love is love and rules are just rules, you can break them, follow them. just imagine that there are no rules or something, well, actually i have no idea, lol, follow your heart hun, do what you think is right, and stay smiling ;) x x x

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Very sad poem, I hope that you can fight the rules and love can win! If not, stay strong, keep it up xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    woweee beautiful =) magnificent write babe...sorry you're kept apart...I wish there was no rules...i'm not sure why u can't but i can pretend i know for this...maybe break the rules...if you love each other, screw the rules...its love...anyways, I hope things turn for the best, you're amazing babe <33 xxxx love ya

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    awe, great poem hun!! what do you mean dammed rules keep you apart although?

    With love,
    Heather.