hun :S i hope you are ok, i'm sorry you feel liek this *Hug* i wish i could be tehre now and let you know that you are still alive and can feel that you are going to find the freedom you deserve, you can be free of this, i wont leave your side and i am going to help you find a way from this, i love you SO much and it hurts me to see you like this *hug* i only wish thtat there were more i could do, i would give ANYTHING for you to feel better, EVERYTHING i have to get you there, I Love You SO much hun, Amazing poem hun *hug* 5/5!!! XXXX

Thanku SO much xxx :-)

wow--that was good...really good...good job-joann

Hey there,
I just wanted to say this is an amazing poem! I cried cause it reminded me of myself! Plus all the poems on the site are usually somewhat the same, but yours really stood out from all the others! I have to say I am really jealous of you wicked talent! It will bring you far in life i know! So keep them coming! Thanks for sharing it with us all!!!

-Carrie

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
Toni this poem is flawless I realyl love it. The idea is so clever, so emotional. I loved every single bit of it. Not one thing wrong with this at all.

One a personal note, I hope everything's okay chickadee. You know I'm always here for you, the way you're here for me all the time. I might not always have the answers and If I think I do, they might not always make sense (hehe) but I'll still try. You mean alot to be, believe it or not hun! You're one of the only people who's ever really listened and wanted to. I love ya! :)

Have to say though, your last stanza seemed quite hopeful to me.

'A shadow of what WAS me' ..I'm glad it's a was and not an Is.

Only, I wish I were here sooner so I could've helped you. I'm sorry.

Take care of yourself munchkin. Head up.
Always a fan, All my love,
Laura.

Thanku evrybody! x

holy crap! that was awsome! just...amazing, i couldnt have even come up with that idea let alone make it rhyme the way you did, i just.....i love it
love you!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxox
jescelle

x Thaanku

thank hunni xxx

wow, that is like deep, its beautiful and touching and amazing hun. that poem kicks serious arse and u deserve a best ever poet award coz ur poems r consistently beyond excellent,
loving u and ur work always,
ellie
xoxoxoxoxoox im always here

Thanks so much x

love the idea behind it, and the poem itself rocks too of corse. amazing as always. hope youl be okay hun, keep youre head up :) luv lu -x-x-x-

:-)

Hey, this is really good..i can relate...keep on writing and take care...great poem!!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

that was excellent loved it!!
gave you a 5 for that!!

Check out some of mine sometime!!
-liz

Thanku ppl x

OMFG!! TONI!!! AHH!! THAT WAS UN-FREAKING BELIEVABLE!! That was the BEST BEST BEST, MOST FANTASTIC poem I have read yet!!!! OMFG!! The imagery was just stunning, and I could picture everything in my mind, it was awsome!! Congrats!! I think you're getting better and better and I can't wait to read what you come up with next!!!

~Sierra

OMFG! Great!

The whole idea is even perfect, there wasn't one thing I would have changed, not one!!

Thanku! xx

amazing poem! i loved it! keep it up! and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
AntiSocial16

amazing as usual , well done