wow this poem can be described as the word that longs in my throat after i read it amazing

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wow... im speechless. this is AMAZING!!!!!! it's absolutely beautifully written. ur incredibly talented!! hope everything turns out for the best. amazing poem! keep up the great work!
Ariane
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Ah, I know I already commented, Toni, but this poem inspired me to write one of my own sort of like it. It is called Horror Everyday. I mean, I don't think I can stress this enough to you Toni, this poem was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Best poem, ever! Definitely a masterpiece and a major improvement on your other poems (not that they were bad because i'm sure all of your poems are good, but I'm just saying, its the best one yet.) You've got me on the tip of my toes waiting for your next poem. lul, Toni, take care, be safe. lol. (Not that that's an issue.)

xoxo!Sierra!xoxo

this is most excellent.. "keep it up and keep on trying, its hard living, when inside your dying.."

i rally loved this poem.. i really did. stay strong.. youl make it.. if i have so far you sure as hell can

Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful!
I loved it!

Rebecca.

Wow thanku everyone! xxx

your poem is really amazing!!

Wow amazing poem, I loved it!!! The idea is unique and the poem is moving! Your very talented! Welldone defiantly one of the best I've read!
Tash
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Hey, Babe. I wrote a poem for you!!!! Actually, you and 3 other people, but it was designed with you in mind. :-D. check it out babe. I hope you like it ...Its called For You

~Sierra

That was excellent! I can truly say I know exactly how you feel. I actually wrote a poem very similar to this. I would appreciate it greatly if you read it sometime. Your input would mean so much to me

beautifulli written keep up the work

Wow...Toni, babe, I think you just got dissed by Missy Debra here. I'd do something about it if you want me too. :0). I'd be happy too. Miss Debra, I think , has forgotten her manners. Oh Well, screw her. :-D. I'm here, forget that childish hag anyhow, lol!!!! Cheers!!

I have that song stuck in my head and I don't know why really. All I know is that it was in some beer commercial.....hmmmmmmmmMMMMmmM??

*still pondering*

lol lyl hun

~Sierra

Girl, I just re-read this, and I'm still as shocked, if not more, as the first time I read it. This is the BEST poem I've EVER read, and you should be so proud of yourself. This is like flawless, the whole idea i can relate to. I love every bit of it and I don't think I can stress that enough to you!!!

You're amazing, Toni. Just thought I'd tell you!!

~Sierra

good wording i like it

wow.....that was just WOW!!! that poem definetely amazing.... i feel like that a lot....like me is in the past...and i'm someone else now...it's funny me and my friend were just talking about this a little while ago...im glad i read this poem, keep up the great work!

Christina

hey, i think your poem is amazing! it has so much emotion in it and i like the way you did the whole mirror thing! hope your ok xxxxxx

This poem was flawless in every way. The scary thing is I feel about myself that way sometimes, and it was really emotional for me to read this poem. You definitely "shattered the glass" for me by writing this poem. If you continue to write pieces of work like this, I would not be surprised if people 10 years from now remember your name. I hope you continue to find inspiration to put out amazing poems like this one.

WOW!! This poem is so amazing and powerful! I really hope you are ok now and that you will stay strong. Keep writing and stay strong...~5/5~
Love alwayz....
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WOW! that has got to eb one o the best poems ive read in ages! am completly blown away! wish i cud write like that lol! keep it up! LoU xxx

wow, very powerful. great write. take care, ciao~lyn