Wow that was great. It was an awesome poem. Hope you got her back together.

LOTS OF LUV
Shawnda(Zach's Gurl)

That was... increadible. truly! I wish i could write that . or pretend at least. REALLY, REALLY good! - Alice

this poem is awesome!! keep on writing, you're really good!!!

Wow... sad poem but wonderful! i started crying:'(

flow was tight, nice choice of words

wow its realy great!!!!

this is an awesome poem, it's really well writen and you worded it so well! i had a clear picture of what was happening as i read it too, wonderful job! awesome poem.

~PLP~ lil slam~

wow..SO well written. I don't even know what else to say...exept that was amazing, one of my faves. keep it up!and thanks so much for your comment.
~Christina

what do you know....another amazing poem. wow you are really talented!!! i can relate so much to your poetry it is amazing!!! lol! anyway great poem...im sorry you feel this way!!!:( luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Masterpiece

That was one of the best poems i have ever read. i have tears in my eyes...quite speachless right now...
great work x x x

A really amazing poem, your very talented, and i really hope that things have started or do start to get better for you. I can really relate. Stay Strong. Andrew xXx

Wow this is truely an amazing poem toni....i can relate so much!!! great job expressing the way you feel! There is so much meaning in this poem...truely amazing! luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Wow...thats probably THE best poem i've ever read. its so....amazing! wow! i knew you were in my favourites for a reason. fantastic x x x

Toni you still amaze me.
remember im here.
:)
love you
x L