What its Really Like

by The Flame Within   Mar 8, 2005


If you could imagine pain and times it by 100 then you would already be dead.
for the place where demons dwell is a dread
where they paint the floors and walls red.

Only one word can fit this picture

Hell

Here they skin you alive
the ones who sold you all the sweet lies
When on earth they are fun
and you always see them with a smile
but they are evil and extremely vile
they care not for you feelings or who you love dear
they just want you to be in pain and fell an eternal fear

but all this you can change with a righteous life as life should be
where you offer it to god and he thanks you dearly
would you trade heaven for one of your sins
would you trade eternal happiness just to get a girl pinned

but if you go to Hell it is your own fault
not the people who led you to believe in a cult
or that you constantly steal from Walmart

You have to take responsibility for the life you choose
because when that life is over you can either win or lose.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    swweeeeeeeeet!! The darkness in this poem was pure!!! once again, I love the refrence to hell and the way you described it. Great one!

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by Ally xo

    yet again another great poem by you, i loved it. thank you for you comment on my poem and you have a unique style of writing 5/5