More cuts, more cuts

by Forsaken Redeemer   Mar 8, 2005


One cut
Two cut
Pain no more

Three cut
Four cut
Blood on the floor

Five cut
Six cut
Slumped on the ground

Seven cut
Eight cut
No-one else around

Nine cut
Ten cut
Scars on my arms

Next cut
Next cut
from my self-harm

More cuts
More cuts
Hear my plea

Deep cuts
Bad cuts
Can’t help me

Last cut
Worst cut
Too late, I’m gone
Why didn’t you help
When you heard my suicide plea…

© copyright Holly Nia Goodson

* i jus wanted to add dis bit, i cut so dis poem came from personal experience but i hate having to cut to feel safe, but i can't help it . if anyone wants to talk bout stuff den email me *

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    Depressed atm so not really into typing much but good poem. Nice flow and all..
    Good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Sakura Kimiko

    This was good.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Patiently Waiting~

    Hey this was really good, you said you wanted contructive critisism but its hard to criticise your work because there isnt anything wrong with it.
    maybe i am too nice or maybe i am write and you are really good.
    its not the best work i have ever seen but i dont read heaps of work because alot bores me, but this doesnt.
    oh and if you wanna talk to me about being sad or whatever you can email me at volcom_stoner1@hotmail.com or add me on msn, its the same adress for that.
    catch, \/oL{o/\/\

  • 18 years ago

    by kristen

    I love it lovelovelovelove

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Hey this is a really great poem I loved it!! I used to cut but I haven't for 3 weeks because I promised my boyfriend so ya know.. But your not alone cuz I know how you feel even though I made that promise now sometimes even I think about cutting so anyways a really GREAT poem.. It meant so much to me!!! Keep it up!!! :-)
    Stephanie

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