Crimson

by LoÑ£ly♥P!rÄτΣ   Mar 9, 2005


My crimson liquid,
flows so freely,
escaping my veins,
like it should be.
look at these cuts,
and see these scars.
You don't understand,
I tried so hard
and as my eyes shut,
life was so grand.
for once in my dreams,
I stopped my hand.
My dreams are seized,
how can it be?
I stop and think,
and now I see,
It's always been you.
Take these pills with my drink,
or pull the trigger and shoot?
Your words were the end of me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by mkhoviyeun

    u're a great poet! 25/5! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by abcede

    wow.. another great poem!! keep it up.. i'm so sorry for your pain! i'm here for ya!
    love always,
    Abcede^,^

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    i love this, ^.^ very talented

  • 19 years ago

    by cac123

    that is soo incredibly sad, and beautiful, i hope you are ok, i loved the flow of this, and it was so deep.
    It was soo sad.
    we are all here for you, take care of yourself.
    If that is you in your profile, then you are gorgeous!!! haha lol sorry i just had to say that hope i didnt freak you out! anyway you have amazing talent, i cant wait to read more from you!
    all my love,
    always.
    cate
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by SavannahSurrender

    hehe i like the poem! 5/5 take a look at mine some time if u want to

    much love
    savannah

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