Why?

by Johnny Marlin 2   Mar 10, 2005


Unexplainable thought
A murder in my head
Overwhelming tension
I wish to be dead

A sentence unformed
A thought left behind
Splicing the stories
To fit my troubled mind

They leave you alone
Scared on the floor
Hurt beyond emotion
A never-ending war

I cannot go on
I cannot step away
God tell me why
I should live this way

I am dead inside
Apathetic in soul
Guidance is nowhere
In a world so cruel

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  • 18 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    You share alot of emotions within your words...i really enjoyed reading this poem! well done!
    luv em

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    Wow! deep poem! i especially liked the second stanza - A sentence unformed, A thought left behind - very good indeed! xxxLoUxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Dire, powerful, and more angry than numb. For some reason I just have to say "Rage, rage against the dying of the Light". Sometimes Dylan Thomas has some incredible wisdom.

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Mac

    Dam dude, i'm impressed, i've read a couple of yours now, and i like what i'm seeing, keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by erely

    I think living in your mind is the most torturous place to live....good luck
    Great Poem

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