Cry

by The Flame Within   Mar 11, 2005


I cry
I'm not sure why
I taste my tears
I run from my fears
I hide from my peers
I've lived so few years
My wrist screams my name
And I feel the shame
But i look away
It calls me, but i must stay
I saved my life
When i put down the knife

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  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Nick, if you did cut, I wouldn't judge you on that. I know it's tempting. I try sometimes, but I can't break skin and its an extremely sad thing. I'm so sorry to hear that you cry. In a way I'm happy to hear of a guy who isn't concerened with what others think of him, but I'm hurt that you feel so depressed sometimes. If you want to talk, I'm here. I'm going through a lot too right now so we would probably have quite a few things in common. :*-(, I'm sorry that you get upset, I really am. Hope to hear from you soon!!

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    Thank you all for your comments. They mean very much to me. And i really hope you enjoyed the poem. I don't really cut, I just want to at time. It's tempting but no. But i do let out my tears. It's the least I can probably do

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Wow, a guy that cuts? How unique. I didn't think there were very many guys who cut, nonetheless admit to crying. I think that's very admirable and makes a true man. Great job, Nick. Keep your head up!

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*LorienElf*~

    loved it! in so few words you created a wonderful flowing poem. very excellent. keep it up!

    ~*LorienElf*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Ally xo

    hey do u have a email just wodering cause i would like to talk to u more and this poem was great i love the rymeing and u r one of my favourites sorry about my spelling but i have to get to my fav program and keep up amazing the work