Aww thats so sad, and scary, very well written, the ending... its so sad, I'm still shocked, I love it, its so powerful, keep it up xxx

Hey, excellent poem, very well written. I hope to read more soon... Take care..

~ sad and v.v. well written, god bless you
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

shows how you really feel your dad will be, im sorry you feel that way.... it was a chilling story, but i loved it all the same, i hope you r doing well, dont forget to write!
jescelle

wow this is so amazing! i love it! a really great work! this poem is really something! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

omg so sad, but really great work! 5/5 PLP

~lil slam~

interesting you have so much negativity for such a young pretty girl. I would think that you would be happier or atleast someone who is more cheerful. I hope that things really look up for you, if they don't you can e-mail me or add me to your msn Lacrossefanforlife@hotmail.com is my msn.

DarkSavior@gmail.com is my e-mail.

Five/Five

Amazing job Andrea! This poem was really just.. amazing and wonderful! Keep going Andrea! Luv ya! (",)

~Krissy

*hugs*

P.S. I hope I talk to you on AIM soon. I miss you!

hey that was great 5/5!it was so scary and sad and so detaled/anyway keep it up,hope to read more.

wow...so dark, sad, yet so amazingly written!!! another amazing poem! keep up the great work.
Ariane
-xXx-

Wow, that was an amazingly powerful poem, Ive been waiting for you to write a new one, They are always so good, Well done :D

you have one wicked imagination girl! awesome poem, intriguing!! 5

with love,
Heather

wow amazing peom just chilling to think of where it came from! writing is great though! take care sweetie x

Wow this poem really caught my attention and its amazing & scary...It's really sad too. I loved the twist at the end, its terrific! Please keep writing!
Simply yours,
Lauren

another amazing poem, Andrea- i hope u will check out some of my new ones as well!

another amazing poem, Andrea- i hope u will check out some of my new ones as well!

Andrea, A chilling write. Sad story. Hope you're doing well. But a great job. hugs, lol, *Ann*

wow, so eery, and dark, i could easily imagine it in my mind, that's really scary, but amazingly written!! that was soo good :) keep up the beautiful work xx

I liked how you made it as though it were a mystery. Thanks for all the comments on mine :)
-A

HOLY!!!!!!!!! AHHH!!!! THAT HORRIFIED ME!!! THAT WAS...AHHH!!!! MAGNIFICENT!!! I LOVED IT ANDREA!! YOU"RE SO IN MY FAV. SECTION!!!