My Soul

by ((Allison))   Mar 12, 2005


I don't want to be here
I just want to leave
Let my soul rise above
As I fall down on my knees

I pray to you so softly
Just let me die, not live
There's nothing left to live for
Nothing else to give

I'm sure some people will miss me
I'm sure some people will care
I'm not sure how they'd react though
To ask them, I not dare

I watch my body lying there
As my soul rises above
I'm so happy my soul has risen
It's like being a weightless dove

Now I'm gone to Heaven forever
To live in peace finally
I'll miss you all so greatly
My soul is no longer unfree

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Over all, I really liked this poem. The flow was pretty good too, except in the second and the last parts of the poem it was a bit different from the other parts. But it was a very good poem, i enjoyed reading it. i'll give it 4, keep on writing.
    SatuzKa

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Wow, very good poem well done 5/5