Alone

by The Flame Within   Mar 18, 2005


When i am alone i feel so scared

when i am alone i think of all the pain i have bared

when i am alone your name comes to mind

when i am alone your voice sounds so kind

when i am alone is when i think thoughts that are bad

when i am alone i think of things that would make you mad

when i am alone so many emotions come out of hiding

when i am alone it is the devil i am fighting

when i am alone all i see is dark shades

when i am alone my visions starts to fade

when i am alone i am tempted to do what people despise

when i am alone i remember all of my lies

when i am alone is when my heart feels weak

when i am alone is when my power starts to leak

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  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Nick, you don't write anymore. I never know if you see any of these or if its my fault that I scared you away or something. I'm sorry about what happened. I folded under pressure, but you can't blame me. I'm not mad at you, I know I overreacted. I was just hurt, that's all. And I'm sorry if I hurt you. But please, don't let what I did affect your stay here, or your poetry. You're a fantastic poet and you need to continue writing, for all of our sake. So, please, come back soon! let me know you're okay!!

    Take Care, love you lots

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by Angels Above

    Hun (Sierra),
    Your not crazy. It's not your imagination. I see it. I just don't think he does yet (my opinion again) You know the saying love is blind (it really is.) Both you, and him write poems to each other. He has wrote a lot to you lately. In my eyes he does have feelings for you (just maybe he doesn’t want to hurt this other girl Jami or again he doesn't see it yet) But again his poems to you speak for themselves. If he doesn't come around you are a very pretty girl (I saw your picture in your profile,) with a lot of potential in your life. If he doesn't grab you soon someone else will if they already haven't. If you really love him than keep on trying (NEVER give up on the one's you love.) Nick you better hurry, and grab this girl or your going to lose out on something special in your life! Keep on writing both of you. You two are great poet's. If you two match up, you both would have great work together.. I would love to read your love poems to each other! My opinions again if I’m offending anyone I'm sorry but everyone has their own title to their own opinion..
    ~Krystle (Sweet Angel)

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    At least what I saw wasn't just a part of my imagination!! YES!! I'm not crazy!! lol-this is cause for celebration!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Angels Above

    Very well written poem. 5*** from me! Between reading both you, and Sierra's poems. I honestly think you two have more than just a friendship. I'm not trying to put words in your mouth but I think your poems to her speak for themselves. I think you have more feelings for her than just friends? I may be wrong but the way you two write poems to eachother sounds more than just friends? Maybe you need to look deep down inside, and really see what you feel for Sierra. You may have a girlfriend already I'm guessing Jami? But again I think you really need to look deep down inside your heart, and see what you feel for Sierra. I am 21 years old, and have been with the same man since I was 15 we are now engaged to be married! When I was your age I use to have feelings for another man but I always looked in my heart to see who I loved more, and I am engaged to the man I've been with for 6 years. I hope you two can figure out your problems with eachother because my honest opinoin is there is more than just a friendship there? Just my opinoin.
    ~Krystle (Sweet Angel)

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    aw, thanks. lol I don't think I'm strong at all, but thanks anyways!! For a while what she said did hurt, but like you said, I realized she knew nothing and so her opinion didn't really matter. Thanks!! lyl hun, ttyl bye!!

    ~Sierra