She's got it all

by ScarredSoul   Mar 18, 2005


She's got it all

the plan
the future
the looks
the smile
the money
the car

She's got it all

in the plan theres a crack
in the future, she sees none
the looks are played out
the smile is broken
the money she doesn't want
the car she doesn't care for

No one would know this unless you cared to look twice...

She's got it all

but you think shes happy?

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  • 20 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    You opened up a new outlook. I love it. Excellent job! >3jess

  • 20 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very good such truth behind this poem! I loved the words u used! Alot of people think life is so great if u have all those things but thats not always the case. Good subject!

  • 20 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Um,....is she not happy? lol. I would be. I think...>i donno. lol, it depends, is it you? Still, wonderful poem. Unique.

    ~Sierra

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    great poem!

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