Lahana!

by Eibutsina   Mar 21, 2005


As I strain
For a light
To guide me
Out of darkness
I heard a sound...so far away

A name echoes
Over the wind
A name so unfamilar
Lahana! Lahana! Lahana!
But no one echoes back...

Only the full moon aloft
Bewithcing as ever.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I have no idea what the meaning of this poem is or who Lahana is, but it left shivers going up my back. It's so eerie and mysteriously beautiful all at the same time. Fantastic poem!

    Take Care and God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    wow a short but really well written mysterious poem....very thought provoking i like the mystrey behind it ..made me think too.
    5/5 beauty of poetry :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Whoa.. beautiful as ever! I have missed reading your poetry. I cleared my favorites out a few weesk ago, but I'm adding you back! lol. Take care! <3

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    sorry Kelly...I care not to explain it as I not "understood" you...LMAO :OP

    Donald - thankyou! I appreciate comments from an artist such as yourself

    Amy - your too kind thanking you also :O)

  • 19 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    mysterious, powerful, andbeautiful poem!!! that poem was awsome, it really left me thinking... good job on the poem hun
    stay strong always...