hey nice poem... well written...and ur feelings our out. whic his good...so keep writing....u sohuld show the poem to whom it refers to..am sure they will see what kind of a friend u r..an they will appreciate it too.

Not the style I usually enjoy, but a good poem.. good job. :D

hey...wow..i really liked ur poem!!!
keep writing it'd be a shame for u to stop...i agree with 'hussain' show the perosn...that's if it was written for someone.
talk to me sometime...i'm in the same poistion as u, wiht my best friend. so please email me or somthing!!!
(strawbs1@hotmail.com)
xox

Very good =) 5 stars for this one.. great job.. Please check out my poems.. thanks, hugs

i really enjoyed this poem, although the flow could be better. you obviously care for someone alot. keep up the good work xxx

omg... this poem hits so close to home... sounds like you and my Ex have been talking... I have nothng on how you can make this better...

Xox Sherrie

a very well written poem. 5/5 for you. sounds to me that you are a very caring person and that you are there for friends when they are in need. =)

wonderful poem, i like it!

aw. such a sweet poem. i liked this line;
Id never take my life
Without proper reason
But if you were to die
That'd be enough to try
For Without you Id be but a line
On anothers sad rhyme.

5/5!

thanks for the comments!

well done, i think Killer of Time gives good advise, you are a really caring person and it shows in your poem
hope all works out good for you
Doreen

ps 5/5
Doreen

I want us to be together
For our love to be true
But its hard to when drinking,
Cutting yourself is all you do

Those lines were great, it was a very good well written poem, good work

awww sad but still really good.. ur really talented! great job! 5/5 take a look at mine if u want to sometime!

much love
savannah

i really like this one, its really creative, and in an interesting rhythm... it reminds me alot of my bestie... but its a great poem 5/5

It is ok just make sure your peragraphs have the same number of lines

well written dark poem 5

Very touching shows so much love! Very well done! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~

heart touching poem...love this poem very much...good job..take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

Good poem! I really liked it! lol 5.0 cud you check out sum of my poems! Thankx

This poem made my heart skip a beat, I'm breatless....It's like you could have written this with my boyfriends words. I know how frustrated you must be, cause it's so hard to understand why a person would harm herself....I hope that you are ok??? Great poem, very emotional!!

*Hugs Sabrina*