Comments : The thought of your death, is more then I can take

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    hey nice poem... well written...and ur feelings our out. whic his good...so keep writing....u sohuld show the poem to whom it refers to..am sure they will see what kind of a friend u r..an they will appreciate it too.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lisa

    Not the style I usually enjoy, but a good poem.. good job. :D

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    hey...wow..i really liked ur poem!!!
    keep writing it'd be a shame for u to stop...i agree with 'hussain' show the perosn...that's if it was written for someone.
    talk to me sometime...i'm in the same poistion as u, wiht my best friend. so please email me or somthing!!!
    (strawbs1@hotmail.com)
    xox

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    Very good =) 5 stars for this one.. great job.. Please check out my poems.. thanks, hugs

  • 19 years ago

    by happy days

    i really enjoyed this poem, although the flow could be better. you obviously care for someone alot. keep up the good work xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    omg... this poem hits so close to home... sounds like you and my Ex have been talking... I have nothng on how you can make this better...

    Xox Sherrie

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    a very well written poem. 5/5 for you. sounds to me that you are a very caring person and that you are there for friends when they are in need. =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wonderful poem, i like it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Andriana

    aw. such a sweet poem. i liked this line;
    Id never take my life
    Without proper reason
    But if you were to die
    That'd be enough to try
    For Without you Id be but a line
    On anothers sad rhyme.

    5/5!

    thanks for the comments!

  • 19 years ago

    by D..

    well done, i think Killer of Time gives good advise, you are a really caring person and it shows in your poem
    hope all works out good for you
    Doreen

  • 19 years ago

    by D..

    ps 5/5
    Doreen

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    I want us to be together
    For our love to be true
    But its hard to when drinking,
    Cutting yourself is all you do

    Those lines were great, it was a very good well written poem, good work

  • 19 years ago

    by SavannahSurrender

    awww sad but still really good.. ur really talented! great job! 5/5 take a look at mine if u want to sometime!

    much love
    savannah

  • i really like this one, its really creative, and in an interesting rhythm... it reminds me alot of my bestie... but its a great poem 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by *Guerita*

    It is ok just make sure your peragraphs have the same number of lines

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    well written dark poem 5

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very touching shows so much love! Very well done! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    heart touching poem...love this poem very much...good job..take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Good poem! I really liked it! lol 5.0 cud you check out sum of my poems! Thankx

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    This poem made my heart skip a beat, I'm breatless....It's like you could have written this with my boyfriends words. I know how frustrated you must be, cause it's so hard to understand why a person would harm herself....I hope that you are ok??? Great poem, very emotional!!

    *Hugs Sabrina*