Wow, this is great, very well written too..Good poem *5*

very well written, I loved every line of it, it flowed very nicely, keep up the work babe :)

awsome poem--->mama

amazing poem!

gr8 poem...i can relate to what you said *5*

really nice poem...u let ur emotions run thru those words.

keep it up. take care

wow really good i like it, i add you so i can read more of your good poems

This is really amasing. brilliant!

Little different, yet very good... Keep up the good work!

A VERY WELL WRITTEN DARK POEM

Brilliant Title, I Don't Usualy Like Dark Poems But I Loved This One 5.0! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Very profound poem I really did love it I gave it a 5 congrads!!!

thats so sad. but very well done. 5/5
~Freak~

WOW...this was really sad. gave me shivers. and I appreciate the honesty in the comment you provided to me. Yes there are different types of pain but i wasnt not stipluating them as all one..I was comparing...the pain the less fortunate feel to the "pain" {hense my quotations} a lot of us have such as warm meals, cable, the internet, an education etc etc. the word pain in my poem is not actually the meaning of the word itself...its a sybolic word for many things we take for granted.

TO YOUR POEM;
I enjoyed very much so, it was really sad and your way of words it quite capturing...very impressive and i think i am going to have to stick yah on my favorites...if yah dont mind that is.
take care 5/5
Scooby