This is such a sad poem it very good though, hope its not true.

that is so touching & makes a very good point

Its very true. I despise the people who criticize others and sometimes I stand up for them even though I dont know them.

OMG:( This so made me cry:( It was so0o0o emotional!!! I loved it *sniff sniff* Great job!

Your poem is awesome and it was soooo sad
hopefully its not true
but there are some dumb people who dont care and say things wrong and mean
but hey this is life.
they dont finally realize until it been done and then when they do it
they feel bad.. those are the stupid people who dont think before they do anything**
n-e ways lol
just keep up the good work girl!!

wow awesome poems, feel free to check out mine too if you please. loved it keep writing

WOW!!!!!!!!YOUR ARE SUCH A TALENTED POET .IM ADDING YOU TO MY FAVORITES.WILL YOU GO READ SOME OF MY POEMS AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK.AFTER ALL I THINK YOUR A BETTER POET.

This is incredible. very emotional. 5/5

MasterPiece

5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love.

Love, Amit ~

wow..that is an AMAZING poem! Keep up the good work!

wow! great job!!!

~*~oh wow, this was a radical poem, i really like it lol,i got goosebumps, keep up the good writing~*~

Wow...amazing...loved every bit of it

this is truly amazing, it is really touching and has a good kinf of moral to it. i cant tell you how amazing this is to read! keep it up and take care
polly ~X~

i loved this, it literally brought tears to my eyes. i really loved it, amazing work! keep it up!

Hey Paula!
I read this poem and I really did love it. It wa sgreat. It reminded me of myself, because I keep a journal and I write like my life in there, except no one else knows whats going on. Without my journal I don't know what I would do. Anyway...is this poem about you...or does it have some truth to it? I gave it a 5 because i thought it was very well written. Please please check out some of my poems!I would apprecite it!

i really like this, i just hope someone listens. lv A, x

i love it, it's greatly writen wow it's really good!

PLP

~lil slam~

that is such a well written poem and so sad

Awesome!!!!