Secrets Of Mine

by Arie   Mar 22, 2005


No one understands me
why can't anyone see
that day by day I fade more and more away

All i wanted was for love but instead I was shunned
You see the cuts and they scare you
but do you even care

You tell me to eat or I will pay but you dont understand what its like to be compared
No one sees the reflection I see in the mirror so you will never understand why I do the things I do

You ask me what I took and I tell you nothing you ask me where I I cut and I tell you no where
See all of these are the secrets of mine

Someday I hope they don't go to far

~This one sucks, but comment and vote please!

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  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    It was good but it colud of been better with some changes
    ; keep writing never stop
    ~HazE

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    it doesnt suck! altho i think the punctuation could do with a slight alterationa nd perhaps make it all ryhme or not rhyme at all rather than little bitds! good for a first submit! take care and thanks for ur comment
    xxxLoUxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    hey! it doesnt suck you can really feel the emotion involved! keep trying and you will succeed! dont pull yourslef down girl! id appreciate your comments on some of my work if you have the time. keep it luv!
    xxxLoUxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    hey! it doesnt suck you can really feel the emotion involved! keep trying and you will succeed! dont pull yourslef down girl! id appreciate your comments on some of my work if you have the time. keep it luv!
    xxxLoUxxx

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