Wow you are such a great writer, the ending was beautiful, your detail and way of writing the emotion is so good, keep it up xxx

Andrea,

I'm so in love with your work, very well detailed and packed with emotion. wonderful work! (i tried to vote and it wouldnt let me:(

Love ya
Heather

Excellent poem....truly love it....well worth the read....

Kalika

AMAZING! i loved it! its a great 1! ill give it a 5/5! if u get time look at some of my poems.. later

~Savannah~

great poem! i love it! really sad but still great story! keep it up!

-BIG HAIRY MONKEY NUTS!!! hehe you're a dork!

Love, Taylor

so good but so sad.... i love you

It was so sad... i loved it though

wonderful.. but very sad

wow that was amazing really got my attention! so sad though...i love your work, and thanx so much for your comment!
xxxChristinaxxx

WOW your an amazing writter. Excellent Stuff, all of your works grab hold of me and take me with them.
5/5 great job.
~Take Care~
-Kit

wow..greatly written hun! Keep on writing. Thanks for the comment on my poem by the way, greatly appreciated. Take Care, Jess x

Hey great poem you have here. Thanks for the comment it means alot to get a comment from a poet such as yourself. Keep writing. See Ya!

that is soooooooooo good!!!!!!

Thankyou for the comments on some of mine! very much appreciated. this one is great! :)

I loved it!! Very sad and full of emotion!! Take care *~ xx

*> : PainOfOne

Wow......touching....do you mostly write about poems where the basis is true? This poem was really deep, sad, but good!! Loved it!!! :-D. Hope you're doing alright!!!

Excellent Poem...Good for you

Andrea, Well written, you words made it seem so real. Great job. hugs, *Ann*

OMG! that is so sad and yet almost a masterpiece with the amazing weather imagery so relavent in the poem. It is so beautifully constructed. Andrea. Its a great poem. Good luck with real life tho, hope its better than this.
good luck

Jemma