Comments : Broken Smile

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow! excellent poem, i love the flow and everything!

  • 19 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Wow, this poem is fantastic. I love the short, rhyming lines. They flowed so well. Great job hun!

    Love,
    Tiff

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Another amazing poem so well written sad but so well done! Take Care!

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Woow.....so deep and sad!!! Extremely well written!! Great job!

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by Erika

    I like it very much, amazing how with just a few words in each sentence y ou manage to write a masterpiece.

  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    Really nice flow of words, I'm going to add you to my favorites, because I want to read more of your work! Awesome job, keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    aww thanks! your already on mine idk if already told you that or not...?

  • 19 years ago

    by SavannahSurrender

    WOW!!!!!! My goodness I love this poem!! I'm going to add you to my favorites and read more of your stuff! Great poem! 5/5!! You explain feelings so vividly in so few words! Great job and keep it up!

    much love
    savannah

  • 19 years ago

    by Latoria

    hey again i like this poem and i like mostly all u other to really like ythis one and the other i wrote this comment well hope u keep me in touch with some of ur newest poems

  • 19 years ago

    by Latoria

    hey again i like this poem and i like mostly all u other to really like ythis one and the other i wrote this comment well hope u keep me in touch with some of ur newest poems

  • 19 years ago

    by Latoria

    hey again i like this poem and i like mostly all u other to really like ythis one and the other i wrote this comment well hope u keep me in touch with some of ur newest poems

  • 19 years ago

    by Valerie

    Wow. That's a great poem. It sounds like it could be a song or something of that nature. (Well to me at least) Well done, well done.

  • 19 years ago

    by Monica Mechelle

    Good POEM!

  • 19 years ago

    by EternalSorrow

    it's so great and i can relate to it..well sorta

  • 19 years ago

    by Jennifer Ross

    dam ur good! lol

  • 19 years ago

    by lil D

    dang girl u really know how to wrie it is just like an ot there feelings poem

  • 19 years ago

    by lindzy

    very powerful poem, i feel like that sumtimes, keep u the good work n if u need to talk then my email is monkies_are_the_future@hotmail.com or u can pm on here
    ~*lindz*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Kiersten Nicole

    i love your work soo much, you rock and you have such a gift. but i know that true talent comes from true feeling, from the heart, so if you need to talk to anyone.. im always here. just email me.
    plasticspud@yahoo.com

  • 19 years ago

    by Forever29

    Such a sad ending, nonetheless a terribly good poem 5/5.

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow...I really liked this piece! So full of emotion's, and flowed beautifully! This was my favorite part:

    "Distorted life
    Vacant words
    Slipping away
    She's left unheard"

    Keep it up~Holly