The Last Touch

by Switchblade89   Mar 27, 2005


The girl I love so much,
ends up being the one I hate,
I never knew our first touch,
would tell me it was fate,

Thats not all we had,
There was more,
and,although some of it was sad,
it never got us sore,

Our love was falling like rain,
never knowing,
and with that came great pain,
that to this day,is still growing,

She doesn't know I'm still in love,
with her in that way,
and the angels up above,
told me thats how it's going to stay,

I finally found out,
that our love was depleted,
now I realize what it's about,
she was too conceited,

After it all,
we became friends,
but the fall,
was our love came to an end.

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  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Hmm...another poem ending with a comma. Interesting.

    Lovely job.

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Hmm...another poem ending with a comma. Interesting.

    Lovely job.

  • 19 years ago

    by KiKi

    Wow this one was so beutiful and sad i really liked it you write really good poems!

  • 19 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    i like it...good job
    xxxChristinaxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by David Paul

    Robert. most of these I've ever read before. me and you are gonna have a long talk when we get back to school. lol. good job dude. l8erz.