I like ur poem, keep writing and check ou tmine if you can. if not then no prob

wow great poem.. very good! I voted a 5 for this one =) please check out my new poem "Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind" it would mean so much to me...thanks, hugs

i like this alot...that sux about your childhood n stuff...mine isn't good either but i'm still living it, writing poems helps alot though. anyways...great poem 5/5
xxxChristinaxxx

I totally agree with reading maven, your poetry has a rhytmic sound, and actually i enjoy reading your poems outloud because it sounds so good. Keep on writing, you have a lot of talent!
SatuzKa

that was sad.... your rhyming was pretty good and it had a lot of emotion... 5/5 for you

Exellent job on this poem! U could feel the emotion and true meaning behind this pom as u read it! Glad to see I am not the only one in my 30's on here. I know that they are others but u don't hear much from them. Love the poem. Check out some of mine if u would Thanx and Take Care!

Another brilliant poem! ur good at this :)

Hey, I like this poem too. I can relate to part. Continue the great writing! Thanks for your coments and pointing out where i needed a correction, i got one for you now : ) 4th line, 'where' should be 'were' I will be looking forward to more writing from you!

Thanks for the fix lizzy

heart felt poem very inspiring

Very sad poem, sorry that happened to you!!! i really liked it, very well written!!!

nice poem i like it

My question, who said poems need to conform to just one style?

Your coment welcom Killer of time.

I liked this poem, nice flow and nice meaning, keep it up!

very deep and heartfelt.. i loved the last two lines.. that was the key.. ur reli gr8.. ur rhyme is reli amazing..
take care
nouna

This is a wonderful poem. I really liked it! You are very talented!!

I liked this, you completely expressed yourself and put your heart into words. You seem like you have a lot of passion... keep writing and your liberated desires will lead you to your dreams!

Cheers,
Richard