I Know a Girl (Unfinished)

by DavidBrendan   Mar 29, 2005


I know a girl who shines like the sun when my arms are around her,
But freezes my heart like a blizzard when she walks away,
I know a girl who seems hard as rock,
but sometimes looks as fragile as glass,

Theres a kind of girl I know,
a kind that makes me smile,
even makes me laugh,
when were so near its like we can never be apart,
shes the kind who makes you question,
how could I have lived without her,
she makes me want to be better,
just for her,
smarter, happier, stronger,
I feel like if shes there
anthing is possible for me,
I've captured her in poetry,
and thought about her in song,
i love her laugh, her smile, and our conversations,
theres a magic about 21 questions,
and for me its meeting that kind of girl,
laying my secrets on the floor,
I'm taking so many risks,
laying out all the pieces of my jigsaw puzzle,
making the picture for someone I've known only for months,
it can feel like if I keep some pieces,
the board under me will break,
then I'll fall in again and this time
I wont be able to bring myself back,
but I've thought about it,
and if I'm dying for someone,
if I should let it all go for someone,
it has to be that kind of girl.

These are two seperate poems, from two seperate times. The first I think was more me and the second was me trying to find hope. It's hard expressing myself with this..because my relationship constantly changes. Anyways, rate for the potential of a poem instead of how it goes as an actual poem please. Comments are very welcome.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    These are really really good! the second one is my favorite of ur poems, it's so sexy!! anyways, great job!

    *Shawte*

  • 18 years ago

    by DavidBrendan

    If things work out, maybe I can finish it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    I feel that you seriously make this into one of the best poems i would really like to see you finish it. I so happy we are talking again instead of sorta just leaving each other alone luv ya
    Jordan

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    I really like this one to... you could prolly make this one of your best yet..
    Xox Sherrie