My pain...

by ~Da1NOnliiNaNa~   Mar 29, 2005


My pain I can no longer hold
I feel so broken up
Lost in this crazy world
Feeling so alone

Many sad things going on in my life
They just don\'t seem to end
And the some good things,
in my life just seem to fade away

I can no longer hold on
I wish to end my life
But I think god has me here for a reason and I just have to hold on
And hopefully I'll make it through.

Plz..rate or comment or do both....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    This poem was good. It held emotion And I want to thank you for commenting on my poem, it means alot to me. Thanks again!

    Much Love,
    Jordan-Paige :-)

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    You will make it through....keep your head up....nice write.......5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Nice poem, very well written. Keep writing!
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Mira

    You capitalized all your "I's." I congratulate you for that.

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