OY!!!!!!!!!!!!! RACHEL, THATS CREEPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol, like it though, nice, solid, darkness. Woowie! lol, good one!

yea..i liked it...nice poem...but it is kinda....weird?
but hey...good poem!
5/5

Very creepy poem. The best kind i think :). Some of the rhymes sounded a bit forced, but i think overall it was a really good poem. Loved how you kept repeating the first line but in a different way each time.
-A

wow this is an amazing poem! yes kinda creepy but still i really like it. i especially like the last stanza...truthfully i think thats probably the only way someone could be completely let go. amazing write!!

damn . .that poem was awesome too! your a really good writer

wow... this poem made me cry... it just reminded me of myself... my dad beats me almost every day... please read my poem "Daddy Please Stop" its about me getting abused... and lately i've been thinking that he might go too far and one day beat me up badly and he'll kill me... i feel like that little girl is me, and her end is my fate *tear*
~Tina

wow, that was a scary poem, i h8 the 4rt that gurls and guys out there are getting treated like that, but remember Karma!!!
very good poem tho
xox bam 5/5

I gave you a 5 that was really good and its sad because that really does happen to people. Keep on writting

wow this was a real eye opener...if a little scary...but it isnt a bad thing being scary......the bad thing is that as a matter of fact...that stuff happens to people.......and its really sad...well done for showing people the truth

Awh. Such a painful poem to read - Very well expressed and written.

<3
Kalah.

woo, awesome poem, the words were frightening! great job! i'm speechless

Love
Heather

I don't know what to say, this poem is sad!!! Wow, I was really scared for that little girl....The poem started of so sweet, but nice twist with the freaking end, but a bit scary too....Great poem, I love it!!!

wow that was awesome, i'm speechless its such a good write and its creepy in a way because it happens every day to some girls. its really good

Wow, that was great and so sad :( I loved the slight repeatition, you wrote that so well, amazing job, keep it up xxx

aww good poem but sad but good

I love you as a poet! You have now been added to me favourites!

Your very good ... it's creepy but well written keep it up. could you please read and comment on a few of mine.
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