I loved it! Thanxs for commenting on mine too. Your poem expressed something that every teenager has to find out, who they really are. Very well expressed. 5/5 from me. Please check out more of my poems and rate/comment.
Hey, I hope I am commenting on the correct poem. You said to comment on "Dear Diary", and this one was "Dear Journal", so I put two and two together. Please let me know if I went to the wrong one.
Anywho, I really enjoyed your poem. It was great all through, and especially in the ending. Wonderful job ;)
good poem n yeah i totalli get ya thanx for commentin on mine just one ting about it it does go on for a bit more like a song witch can make the reader loose intrest but i knwo y u do taht cos i do to jsut to keep gettin out ur feelings good on ya xx
WOW omg!! i loved this sooo much it is awesome! its so full of emotion and pain and all that good stuff (pains not rlly good but u know what i mean) neways i totally love it.. thanks for commenting on my poem... maybe u cud check out some more of mine? kk that b great!