wow, superb, really really moving, full of emotion in every line! hope everything's okay!

That was really incredible, i enjoyed it very much.. I know that feeling of letting go, I feel it every, and if I actually had a diary/journal I'm sure i'd relate very well, but since I don't it was still very emotional andI vote 5/5, come check out my poems!

NO!!!! You're not doing that....that hurt to read that. I can't imagine it.

really good write!! i hope this isn't your real suicide note though. i mean its a great poem, but i wouldnt want this to be your final one! you have too much talent!!

that poem was really moving and strong! you have talent girl!

I don't hope that it's a real suicide not....Stay!!! Great poem, so full of emotions, I reallu love it!!! Hang in there and keep your head up high!!!

I love this poem! I have a poem that relates to this, Razor Blade Lullabye, check it out sometime. 5/5 from me!

That was an amazing poem, I just hope it wasn't true.

Very creative in the use of certain lines. I hope that you can deal with what's wrong in your life, if not, you can talk to me about it. I've helped a lot of people through tough times. My e-mail address is linkinpark05@hotmail.com. Stay strong!

Wow that was sooo Beautiful, words can not describe it's beauty. just 1 thing
"I promise you i wouldn't lose the fight"
*promised*
"When my family find you"
*finds*

And i really loved this verse and how it ended, it almost made me cry!!

*You will be found when i am dead,
They'll see your tear stained front,
You will be found, you will be read,
And me? they can't confront.*

I hope you ok girl and if need to talk my email is phoenix_shadowed@hotmail.com and don't worry i know how you feeling.

Be strong
Luv Tash
xoxoxoxox

liked this poem a lot, very emotional. hope you are ok, keep writing because you have a great talent here

stay strong always, lu -x-x-x-

yay! this was grrreeeaaattt! I hope you don't leave... I would be SO sad! You are an amazing poet and person. Hold on!
Car

This is fantastic, your stuff is really good i just dont know what to say! WOOOOOOOOOOW!!! x.

wow this was so sad. It made me cry. I loved it. It was beautiful written. Stay strong and don't give up the fight. its not worth it. Ur an amazing poet

hey- nice poem. but suicide is NEVER the answer- trust me i tried to kill myself and im so happy i didnt manage to do it now. cu tc keep writin x

thanx 4 all ur comments!!!! jst for the record im not dead! lol yet...haha kiddin xxxx

Hey great job again! 5/5 Please read some of my poems as well... our style of writing is pretty similar.

~ Tina

you really expressed your self in this poem great job

AHHHH Homie that was soooo good! I totally give you a 5! -<3 Smeagan

Incredible.
You are SO talented.
Well Done.
Keep Writing.
Hope everythings ok.
Emma x