Had enough

by Amanda   Mar 30, 2005


I was upset this morning, thought I'd have a drink,
to take all the pain away, but now i cannot think,
I was thinking stupid thoughts and feeling so alone,
thinking of how i could get through it on my own,

I feel so unappreciated when i only ever do so good,
no one seems to respect me, even though they should,
I wanted someone to care, make things seem alright,
no one heard my pleas and cries in the lonely night,

I woke up with a pillow, full of my soggy tears,
i must have been dreaming of my biggest fears,
It doesn't seem to feel, like i had much sleep,
I won't even talk to anyone or else I'd only weep,

I feel trapped in a hole, this is not usual of me,
nobody has even noticed, because they cannot see,
Someone please stop to help me, take my hand in yours,
Take me to a brighter day, out through the open doors.

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

This isn't very good but I'm feeling kinda low today.
Also had too much to drink too. LoL! Please comment
I would really appreciate it. Thanks :)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    I see you have a good ablility to convey evry emotion and thought well. I read about 4 poems today and you are gifted in that area, alot of people have problems but you do very well. I like that about your work I can feel. Well good job will try to read more later ok...

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    I love the poem its awesome......
    I can relate to here

    I was upset this morning, thought I'd have a drink,
    to take all the pain away, but now i cannot think,
    I was thinking stupid thoughts and feeling so alone,
    thinking of how i could get through it on my own,

    I feel so unappreciated when i only ever do so good,
    no one seems to respect me, even though they should,

    it makes me think of how i feel after i smoke or drink. awesome poems. and if ya want could u check out some of mine. plz thanks awesome job

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    the flow was alot better and the way you portraid it was really well done. I wrote in the first person in a poem called Owl or the owl tell me what you think take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Carmen

    that one was great, just like your others

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