A Bit of Advise

by Debra   Mar 31, 2005


How could I
Have let you go
I should have told you
All that you didn't know

My heart was broken
And torn apart
I knew I loved you
From the very start

You never know
What a first love brings
Who would have guessed
That you gave me wings

I loved you so much
My heart started to ache
But in our relationship
I made one mistake

My love for you
I never told
I just couldn't seem to let
My feelings unfold

You began to feel hurt
Like I didn't care
Not knowing my pain
If you weren’t there

You gave it a little
To see if I would show
But I still didn't
Even though all my feelings did were grow

You finally gave up
And tossed in the flag
Confessing to me
That your own feelings had started to lag

I know if I had just shown my love
That this wouldn't be true
If only I had admitted
That I couldn't live without you

If only I had told you
We might still be
I wish I could go back
And let my feelings free

Now that I've lost you
I don't know what to do
I tell myself I’m over it
But I know that’s not true

So this is warning
A bit of advise
That just thinking your feelings
Won't suffice

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jesse

    great write and very true. I have been through what sounds like the same thing. Sometimes you must go through the rain to see the sun.