Waiting...

by David   Mar 31, 2005


Waiting,
For the day you'll hold me tight,
Waiting,
For the day you'll treat me right,
Waiting,
For the day you'll give it your all,
Waiting,
For the day you'll stand tall,
Waiting,
For You.....

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Donna

    Wow. i really enjoyed dis poem. its short n 2 de point. well done. ur really good keep up the good work :D

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥Munchkin♥

    Amazing poem... don't stop writing. I totally understand that poem. You're very talented. And that poem was short but to the point... Keep writing and I'll keep reading :) xxx love always xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Victoria

    that was really good...you have a lot of talent...thanks for your comment btw...and keep writing...you really understand wut a lot of people go through...like genuinely understand...your awesome...peace

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    awesome poem, i know how you feel.......keep it up, you've got bunches of talent =)......~much love~ ((let me know what you think of some of mine if you get a chance))

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 19 years ago

    by OnlySoStrong

    Short but right to the point... Nice 5 out of 5