How Long...

by David   Mar 31, 2005


When will you see the fire in my eyes,
When will you see that these are not lies,
Not understanding why you can't believe me,
Not understanding why you can't treat me,
The way I should be treated,
My love for you will never be defeated,
When will you see that I'm not leaving,
When will you learn that I'm not deceiving,
Give me a chance thats all I'll ever ask,
Stop caring what other people think and take off your mask,
Please don't hide your love for me so,
For if you do you'll never get to know,
What it really feels like to be in love,
And get treated like a queen from the heaven above,
So in this I ask you this,
Just right before i give you your last kiss,
Why,
Why such fear of holding me till the night turns black,
Why,
Why such a fear to kiss me back,
Why,
Why can't you open up to me,
Why,
Why can't you just see,
That Your my angel from heavens above,
And I'll Always feel this hurting love,
That hits my heart deep,
So that i can't even sleep,
All i want is your never-ending passion,
Of which burns inside you in a orderly fashion,
Don't hide how you feel,
Let your feelings become real.

I Love You Brittney....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    David,

    Raw emotion at it's best my friend. I know what it is you are feeling in this write, having been there also once. Never give up, I believe that one day she will realize how much love you have for her in your heart. Keep writing.

    Thanks for you comment on my poem.

    Regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by quick&painless

    Great poem. i know how you feel. keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*EsTeR*~

    Dude thats an awesome poem great job

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥Munchkin♥

    Hey... I thought this poem was amazing. Very well written and full of feeling. I've been one of those girls who resists. I gave in in the end though as will your girlfriend. Unfortunately when I gave in it wasn't the same... he treats me different now. Not so much effort. I hope that when she gives in you'll continue to try make her happy as she'll try for you. Good luck sweetie. Msg me anytime xxx Loves always xxx ( Sallimac01@hotmail.com )

  • 19 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    hey thank you so much for your comment... i'm gla to know that i can talk to you
    and GREAT poem... i really liked it!
    Thanks again... take care ~ Tina