So Close

by JustAFoolInLove   Apr 1, 2005


Tonight is dark
And no one’s here
Now I’m succumbing
To my fear

Vision’s blurred
My throat is closed
From a threat that I,
Myself, imposed

Why’d I think it?
I’d almost won
But now I’m losing,
Not having fun

I struggle hard
To run away
But, no matter what
I always stay

Tonight I was
A desperate pawn
But I came so close…
To holding on

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Hard-hitting last stanza!

  • 19 years ago

    by Speed

    Great poem(Y)(Y)

  • 19 years ago

    by troubled

    aww zac i hope ur ok...thats a great poem but its so sad! keep up the great work tho..

    *jen-jen*

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    I second Sammy. You've worked much too hard to give up anything now... Please don't do anything. You know I'm always here... just call someone if you need help, ok? please don't do soemthing you'll regret

  • 19 years ago

    by Mira

    Wonderful.

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