Haunting Memories of the Past

by Chelsea   Apr 4, 2005


My plans are such a failure
Only wanting this to last
Waiting, hoping, searching
Why can't we forget the past?

I loved you like a sister
While we played this stupid game
While we both thought we understood
But our thoughts were never the same

I'll miss you on these warm rainy nights
I'll miss the dreams that we shared
But I'll never forget the pain you caused
The again why would you care?

You pushed me down as I tried to fight back
You ripped open my unhealed wounds
You try to say you're sorry
But I'll never fall for you

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  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Maybe add something because it doesn't seem to be quite finished. Still it was great.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~Kady~

    Yeah this was a very great poem! Thanks for commenting on mine! I really appreciate it!! ^_^ Your poem was really well written! Yeah as Lil Luce said, I was getting into it and wanted to know what happened! But it was cut off *cries* HAHA Oh well! WONDERFUL!
    ^_^ V ~Kady~

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    hey there...i really liked this poem but think it would benefit from being one or two stanzas longer as i was just gettin into it and really wanted to know what happened etc...really great poem. thanks for ur comment!
    take care
    xxxLoUxxx