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by Toni   Apr 5, 2005


Falling
…On my head
Feeling
…So dead
Again

The sun comes out and the night
It draws so near
So close
So far
Filling me with fear

I want to talk like normal people do
I want to feel like normal people do

I’m running
I’m running
No I won’t stop, no I can’t stop
Won’t let myself drop
I can’t fall anymore…

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  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    really different to your usual stuf, and still excellent, very deep. hope you are ok, take care always, lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    thats really diff toni, good to see you trying out new styles and i think this poem seemed very dark, sort of like one of those dreams where u cant wake up or you can't scream in it, if u no wat i mean, im still really worried about you hun, are you okay?
    luv,
    ellie
    xoxoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Hmmm very different style to what you usually do. With a smidgin of Dark in there too. Very unique, but I'm not sure how to interepret(Sp?) the last line.

    I can’t fall anymore…

    It's either sayin you're at rock bottom, which gets me very worried.

    or

    It's saying that you're fighting, which is so very uplifting to hear :)

    I'm going to assume It's the latter, given the line before, but still know that I'm here for you, just incase I'm wrong :)

    Take good care of yourself.
    All my love,
    Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    you don;t have to drop hun :) cos i will catch you :) cool poem :) xxxxx