The Day I would Die

by Amit   Apr 7, 2005


If I would have to die tomorrow,
I would think of our past life.
I would leave with a feeling of
proud, that I had you as my wife.

I'd be filled with sweet memories,
happy, that you were my soulmate,
and my unconditional love for you
showed me a way to heaven's gate.

I loved you with all my heart &,
spent my times in joys & laughs,
You were by my side like a shadow,
you were definitely my other half.

I lived a life devoted to you hny,
I never left you standing alone.
Words were heard without saying,
you will recall when I'd be gone.

I spent a lot of time with you,
granted your wishes with delight.
With my love, I eased your pains,
I was with you, everyday & night.

I loved you for your inner self,
and not for the hunger of lust.
I felt something like true love
&our relation was built on trust.

If I would have to die tomorrow,
I'd like to be a star in the sky.
So that you'll see me every night,
until the very day you will die...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    This is so excellent. sweet and lovely sentiments, i really loved reading this. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Gerard Kurt

    That is a very passionate poem. If not empowered by love to have the desire to write that, then I don't know where the inspiration flows. Thanks for voting and commenting on my poem.
    Its a 5/5.

    Gerard KUrt

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesse

    Wow, beautifully written. I feel the love you have for her when I read that. You are a very lucky man to have someone to share yourself with like that (not like you needed me to tell you). Cherish every moment you have with her.

    Take Care,

    Jesse

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha Miller

    Hey AMit, thank you for taking a look at my poems. After reading your poems they made me feel a little up beat if you know what i mean. They are trully a talent and i wish the best of luck to you in life. Samantha

  • 19 years ago

    by Jenny Sys

    Great poem deffinatly 5/5
    jen x