Comments : If I am Not Here Tomorrow

  • 18 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    wow! this actually brought a small sting of tears to my eyes cuz i started thinking bout my bf and how much he means to me. your an amazing writer. keep it up! and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
    ps: thanks for the comment on my "I'm In My Tears" poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    nice write amit....what a beautiful poem!....perfectly written! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Serenia

    wow that was a really great poem. i love how you write your poems. keep up the good work. 5/5 thanx for commenting on mine ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautiful Amit, what else is left to say. hugs, love, *Ann*

  • 18 years ago

    by **Stary_nights**

    aww..this is really sad. reminds me of a different poem called something like "if tomorrow never comes" or something like that...they both make me cry:(!! they're sad, but yet happy. anyway, excellent job!! keep it up~
    love ya~

  • 18 years ago

    by Nobia

    wonderful write...very touching...ure getting better and better!!!keep it up! 5 for sure!!! see ya take care...

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Very well done, i liked the way you presented it, showed how things made you closer. What you liked about love and so forth (the flights)

    I really liked this poem Amit, i think it is one of the better ones i have read on here.

    Dark Savior.


    P.S. Thank you for your comment on my poem, i am glad to see that i got a comment so quick and such a nice response to my poem. I am glad to see that someone is taking notice of them and they are not just being swept under the rug.

    Thank you!

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Aww that was such a sweet poem! loved it 5.0

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Wow that was sooo beautiful but so simple in a sense, you took a basic scenario and turned it into one of the best, most moving and most beautiful poem i've read in ages!

    Loved it5*

    p.s thanks for your comment it really means alot!

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Amit, this was absolutly beautiful *wiping tears* and so very well written. All your poems are straight from the heart. Thats only one of the things I love about you and your work. Once again its another masterpiece for you. 5/5

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Insane Inside And Out

    It's such a sweet poem. Keep up the writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kailynn Makenna

    Hey this is an awesome poem!! you have so much talent!! thanks for commenting on my poem!! its means a lot to me!! awesome job *5


  • 18 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    Wow! That was a beautiful Amit! Even though I'm only 12, that poem in a way made me think of the person I love. It really means a lot that you commented. He really does mean the world to me, but some people just don't understand that. I can really tell you love Nidhi. I wish you both happiness. Beautiful write Amit! (",)


  • 18 years ago

    by Kristen

    i love this poem, its a great concept and beautifully written..gave me the chills even..great job :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Aww, one of your best yet! =) Great job!


  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Beautiful as always Amit, it brought tears to my eyes!!! You are such an amazing writer and your poems are so straight from your heart, I can really feel that when I read your poems!!!

    Hugs n' love Sabrina

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Lee

    beautiful! good job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Another wonderful poem amit, really beautiful once again, keep on writing and thank you for all the comments, :) xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    I just LOVED it. It was so heartfelt and sweet!!! Great job Amit. 5/5:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Positively Marbolous! Lmao. Seriously though. That is a brill poem. I feel happy that i got a comment of someone of your talent! Thankyou very much. Luv Gem xx