wow! this actually brought a small sting of tears to my eyes cuz i started thinking bout my bf and how much he means to me. your an amazing writer. keep it up! and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
ps: thanks for the comment on my "I'm In My Tears" poem!
aww..this is really sad. reminds me of a different poem called something like "if tomorrow never comes" or something like that...they both make me cry:(!! they're sad, but yet happy. anyway, excellent job!! keep it up~
Very well done, i liked the way you presented it, showed how things made you closer. What you liked about love and so forth (the flights)
I really liked this poem Amit, i think it is one of the better ones i have read on here.
P.S. Thank you for your comment on my poem, i am glad to see that i got a comment so quick and such a nice response to my poem. I am glad to see that someone is taking notice of them and they are not just being swept under the rug.
Amit, this was absolutly beautiful *wiping tears* and so very well written. All your poems are straight from the heart. Thats only one of the things I love about you and your work. Once again its another masterpiece for you. 5/5
Wow! That was a beautiful Amit! Even though I'm only 12, that poem in a way made me think of the person I love. It really means a lot that you commented. He really does mean the world to me, but some people just don't understand that. I can really tell you love Nidhi. I wish you both happiness. Beautiful write Amit! (",)