One big mistake

by Unrequited   Apr 8, 2005


A beautiful face
angels crying
one big mistake
a lover dying

a graveyard’s light
feel the sorrow
the moon’s delight
painful tomorrow

a rushing feeling
what to do
mind is reeling
her thoughts untrue

cross the field
hopeless depression
secrets revealed
answer the question

pray for peace
i pray for you
ask for love
feelings overdue

watching the night
pass her by
she begins to leave
and slowly die

precious moments
given away
one last heartbeat
in the ground i lay

memories forgotten
feelings that hide
my life is finished
nothing left inside

a cool summer breeze
on a hot muggy night
hovering the grave
no one in sight

a beautiful face
of an angel crying
one big mistake
and a lover dying
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i hope you guys think this is good, cause i'm not so sure. it's just a bunch of thoughts that came to me all of a sudden. hope you enjoy it!

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Kymber*

    I really love your work, this one espically

  • 18 years ago

    by metuka

    Good flolwing I like your writing keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Wow well i loved your thoughts then lol. Great Job with this one. Absolutly wonderful.. it all went together so perfectly and the rhyme scheme was jus awesome! great grand job lol.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    wow i really liked this one...a lot better then the other one....it flows really well....5/5 great job luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by crystal

    that was amazing! i loved it. very well written. it flows really well. great job.
    crystal

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