Love can really suck! Another great poem! U showed true feelings! Keep it up! Check out some of mine if u would! Thanx!

hi! this poem was awesome. the only flaw was this line: "As my heart slowly starts to tair" the last word should be 'tear', not tair. other than that, great job! 5/5
p.s- if you'd ever like to talk, just PM me. i understand what your going threw

very heartfelt and sad your emotions are truely released in your poems.... i love it! great work! >>5/5<<
bec

I like this poem, maybe because in ways i can relate and understand the meaning, well writtren
xox

soooo good! I voted a 5... keep it up..
hugs

you're right, regardless that the love isnt there you have to stay strong for yourself. this is a great poem! keep up the writing! and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
AntiSocial16
5/5

I can really empathize with this poem. Well done. I love this poem. you have a good talent for writing poems. Keep It up.
~@L€X~

Great poem! Very well-written. Thanks for your comments on my poetry.
-Kate

i know how u fell hun xxxx

wow..that was really pretty! i can totally relate to it! keep up the good work!

you decribed a broken heart very well 5

I like this alot...
The ONLY thing I would do is shorten the one line I can't seem to handle all of this
You've taken away every good feeling and every feeling of great bliss

I really like this poem though very well thought out..
5/5!!!

Another great poem. It was all written very well although it is short it really express what you really feels. I can totally relate to it after what happen to me. Still Great work!!! 5/5 =)

Oh by the way could you comment on my new poem titled My Stort Part II thanks!!!=)

nice i like this one too

Great concept dear!

i rele like this one aswell
lilkit x

very nice flow

WOOPS READ THIS ONE TWICE IT WAS AS LOVELY THE SECOND TIME