Very well put! I can really relate to this poem! Nice work! Take Care! Brooke

Very nice idea in this poem. Very original.

It started off very nicely, but I think you lost it towards the end. The last two lines are just as good as the start, but i think the middle could do with some work. Especially since you tried to rhyme and then didn't. Just a thought and opinion though :)

Take care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

very well-written! 5/5.. awsome job!

Hmmm kind of made me think that this person should have hurt you a lot..Happened to me too, don't worry...Really good poem, gives out a bitterness...Take my advice: "Carry on, it's time to forget the remains of the past, so carry on..." it's a song I used to listen to when times where bad...take care!!

i think its a wonderfully written poem! i kind of get the impression that you broke off a relationship with someone who has hurt you very much in the past and now let everyone know this. and if that's the case, you dont need them. very well written. keep up the good work. you have a great talent! and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
AntiSocial16
5/5

Well done. This poem is very different from other poems i have read by other poets. You show it doesn't have to be perfect stanaz's and perfect ryhmes to be a real poem. You show such emtion in this poem. keep it up. I enjoyed it.
~@L€X~

loved it. Such beatiful writing should not go to waste, and im glad it isnt never stop writing.

5/5
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always,
cate

this is amazing i rele liked the style
take care xxxx

I already love your style! You take your weakness adn you bring it forth, and beat it down. Very strong, excellen t, uplifting style.

Well written. Thanks for commenting on my poems! 5/5 Keep writing =)

wow that was great another five!

wow strong words alot of emotion is portrayed in this.... i love it wonderful work truely touching! >>5/5<<
bec

I really like this one.. Thats very deep
5/5

Wow that was really great!! The poem was written very well and it flows great. Your a very storng person. Great work!!! 5/5 =)

Nice i like the flow

another great poem, the flow was really good and it was once agianfiled full of emotion,greeta job xxxxx

the pain of lost love and broken heart express well 5

Amazing, so emotional and sad.....Good you got it all out, it's better than keeping it inside!!! I really love this poem, you did a gerat job!!!

*Hugs Sabrina*

wow another really gud poem 5/5
-lost