Visions

by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist   Apr 9, 2005


Visions of razors
visions of knifes
visions on me
ending my life

visions of no one caring
visions of heaven
visions of me
trying to get there

visions and thoughts
visions of you with her
visions of my bad life
not getting any better

visions of my torn heart
visions of things not getting healed
visions that this is reality
visions that this is not fake but real

visions of my arms
torn and cut with no more room
visions of me cutting too deep
and dying at a young age too soon

visions of a girl
who pretends to be someone else
visions of a guy hurting her
and not knowing how it felt

visions of the world
getting worse and worse
visions of the people
who are confused and unsure

visions of everyone
surrounding my Paine
visions of the people
and everyones too blame

~yes please comment and vote it would mean a lot i worked hard on this but it isn't too great but i kinda like it ... donno why ...~

please please vote and comment~

thanks for reading

-by sabrina

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  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    hey! dont say this isnt good....well i guess it isn't good, its better than good, its freakin awesome!! ok im done being corny now lol.....i can once again relate.....and im sure you know im here if you ever need to talk.....keep that head up =) love you lots and lots lol ~much love~

    -brittnay- ((how could i not give this a 5?? lol 5/5 once again))

    ps sorry for being so corny...

  • 19 years ago

    by James

    beautiful poem ur very talent sorry I didnt comment on all of ur poems I did rate them all thank you 4 comment on mine

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    i like it =)..just so you know, there are 2 ppl who use this name..i am Sarah and the other person is CC..i wrote the poem Helpless Mother and she wrote So Far Away and A Broken Heart. Jus tot let you know..keep noting us =)..we'll try to sign our names at the end so you know..thanx! and again good peom =P

  • 19 years ago

    by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist

    haha thanks tell me when you geta new poem

  • 19 years ago

    by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist

    thank you amanda!! luv ya too!

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