Lost Hope

by metuka   Apr 11, 2005


There is no hope for you and me
We had it all, it was meant to be
But fate decided other way
It separated us that day...

You're alone, hopping to survive
You lost your hope, and I lost mine
Don't look behind! Try to proceed
Even if it seems you won't succeed.

The life is one, and so are we
We have to try and learn to be...
alone

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  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    This is short and sad, but i liked it:D
    only think that caught my eye was "We had it all, we meant to be" you should try cxhange it :)

    well written poem :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Piper

    this is a sad poem and it is hard to be alone when you have been together for so long 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Hina

    "We had it all, we meant to be"
    To make it more rhythamatic, use TWAS instead of we...Also, it makes it sounds more professional. Nicejob!
    ~Hina

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    sooo good!! loved it soo much..another 5/5..your really good.. i hope that you continue to write:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    NICE, very good! keep it up.. Please check out my poem "A place called heaven" it would mean a lot.. thanks!

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