A Final Goodbye...

by deadnalone   Apr 12, 2005


I don't quite now if this is in the right place. I don't know where it came from or where i was going...

See a battered body,
Lying on the ground,
Direct your eyes away from it,
Forget the thing you found,

Don't reach out to touch,
The bruised and broken shell,
It is fading and oh so fragile now,
Vanishing into hell,

Don't come too close,
To the bleeding open casket,
Don't stare at the dying heart,
Forget now, don't ask it,

Don't try to help it,
For it is beyond your aid,
This dying girl, she needs your help,
But she, you can't save,

Breathing her last breath now,
Takes in the dirty, blackened air,
She looks up into the world,
The color of her hair,

She opens her mouth to speak,
But the words don't come so fast,
You bend down to hear them,
The words she will speak last,

"Please take my hand,
And hold me as i die,
Hold me gentle in your arms,
Watch this last tear i cry..."

"Please always remember,
My final words, my love,
I never, ever stopped loving you,
And ill save a seat for you up above..."

Then her body became lifeless,
In his warm embrace,
And all his is left with now,
Is the memory of her face...

*All votes and comments greatly appreciated as always.*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Fantastic poem hun!! Its absolutely brilliant, imagery was flawless..just brilliant!!! Your recent work is all so good, hope to see more!! xxxxxx

    Here if you need me xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    whoa hun, fab!! the lines

    She opens her mouth to speak,
    But the words don't come so fast,
    You bend down to hear them,
    The words she will speak last,

    stood out aswell as many others, and the finish was perfect. always here if ya want or need me :)

    lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by Lmay

    oooo, i like it, great imagery and description, 5/5!
    Love always, Lmay xXx