Unsure what to believe

by »«¤ß詤»«   Apr 14, 2005


Torn in two
mixed emotions and shattered dreams
different stories
friendships ripped at the seams

i wish i could return
to when life was black and white
no two faced b*t*hiness
just fun never any time to fight

friendships wrecked
betrayal echoing through my heart
Shields of lies covering up
but really only tearing me apart

stories changed
changed to sound like their good and right
lies uncovered
how i wish we girls were all still tight

unable to know the truth
or what and who to believe
now I\'m losing some innocent friends
and their absence i must grieve

stop...
before its too late

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amy Jo

    I feel you on that one.. muy bien!! I can relate totally!! MWUAH!

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    I don't think this is your best, but I appriciate the thought behind the poem.

    Sorry, but I'd have to give ya a 4 on this one...slang terms just sorta kill the meaning of a poem. (to me. Just remember this is just my opinion...)

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    this poem was great. it was kinda sad.

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Brilliantly written, i like it alot...
    I can feel the emotions you put into the poem...
    definitely a 5...
    All the best to you...
    ;-)

  • 18 years ago

    by AJ

    thats sad. very good though. great job
    ~keep it up~ 5/5

    -no more

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