Mind's Function

by Trevor   Apr 15, 2005


Function of the mind
Mind eye's view
Views the people around
Around you walking
Walking but always silent
Silent staring
Staring at your despair
Despair at the surrounding life
Life has treated you wrong
Wrong lies, emotion dies
Dies in blackness alone
Alone deep in the function of the mind.

-I would really love if you voted and commented. I'm not even sure what this poem's supposed to be saying, I just....wrote it and it confuses me but I liked it.

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  • 19 years ago

    by candy

    awesome poem babe!! once again, your an awesome writer. great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Zetta Roth-Yale

    Wow, Your peom is simple but yet it is also one full of feelings and even if you did not know what you were writing about, it came out in a very simplistically complex way and i give you mad props for this one.

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥CRIMSONxX♥

    wow thats really good, a lil confusin but i think thats just me, thanks for your comment, means alot to me :)
    great poem, keep up the good work!
    xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by *YaSmIn*

    although it confused me too lol...i really liked it...i like the way u wrote it and how u started every line with the last word from each sentence...i like that...very good 5/5...and keep it up!!
    ~*~yasmin~*~

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