My perfect lover

by midnight♥lullibys   Apr 15, 2005


I love your deep, dark brown eyes,
one look and I'm mesmerized.
so very full of wonder,
you are my only lover.

you are my one and only,
with you I'm never lonely,
always you were there for me,
please say you always will be...

after all i put you through,
most guys would just say we're through,
but you stayed through everything,
u know thats just amazing.

i will try to do my best
to return every favor
but you do so very much
you are my perfect lover

.-*JARRET I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! after all the shit i pulled you still stood by me thanks for everything!!!please please comment/vote I'd really appreciate it*-.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    I loved the love behind it, really, it was very deep and sweet of u, and Jarret would be wise to not break up with u.

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very sweet poem you must care about your boyfriend alot 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Hey thanks for the spelling mistake i dont think no one else seen it lol .. nice poem been there felt that. you lucky tohave some one like that. 5/5 nice write

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Very sweet poem. I loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    That was a lovely heartfelt poem, Whilst reading I could feel your emotion in the poem and your regret for hurting him, You are very lucky to have them and it shows you feel that, they are also lucky to have you.. I enjoyed this poem, the format and structure were fine, the rhyming didn't come across as too forced, all in all a good poem, one spelling problem.. "You stayed threw everything" should be "through everything" but thats just nit picking, well done

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