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by Toni   Apr 17, 2005


I can’t stand it; I CAN\'T stand this pain
Breaking me every day
Tearing at my fears and doubts
Hurting me in every way

And each day I stay in this painful place
I die a little more
My tears fall a little longer and
My heart becomes more raw

And I CAN\'T stand this; it’s all too much
I can’t stand feeling this way
Longing to be alone, craving people’s touch
Ignoring what IT says

These tears, they won’t stop falling now
Another wasted night
Sat alone just typing away
Struggling with my plight

Stay away from me, no please don’t go
I can’t live my life this way
So for now I’ll just keep hanging on
Maybe tomorrow’s a brighter day..

- Pointless and pathetic poem

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  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku peeps :-) xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    great write, there seemed to be a lot of anger and confusion in it. i cant say pointless or pathetic are words to describe this poem. keep it up and stay strong, lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    i totally disagree i thought it was an awesome and very strong poem, so filled with emotion,
    always here,
    ellie
    xoxoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Wow so much pain and frustrations in this one, sorry that you have to feel like this!!! I'm here for you if you ever need to talk!!! love this poem, I relate so much...

    *Hugs Sabrina*

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    hun, you always have me, to help you when you need it, thats a fact and a promise! i lov eyou! 5/5 poem hun! not pathetic!!!!